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Chiheisen no bureido

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1Chiheisen no bureido Empty Chiheisen no bureido Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:09 pm

Bloodypolarbear

Bloodypolarbear

Equipment Name: Chiheisen no bureido
Tier: 1
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: is used in tandem with a shield for melee combat purposes.
Description:
Spoiler:
it weighs 57lbs and is 1.30 meters in length from pommel to tip of blade

Strengths:
-high resistance to cold and heat
-high resistance to rust and wind damage
-stays sharp twice as long as a normal blade of the same quality


Weaknesses:
-will break when parrying a weapon 2 tiers higher and from weapons of 1 tier higher
-highly susceptible to ice of any kind (will break after 2 tier 1 ice attacks)
-will break when more than 0.7 tons is applied at any one time



Last edited by Bloodypolarbear on Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:30 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:20 pm

Ryandurbur

Ryandurbur

Well, for one thing, it's a T1 weapon. It wouldn't have COMPLETE resistance to rust and wind damage. And it would be susceptible to higher amounts of damage from a weapon 1 tier higher. Other than a those few changes, it looks good.

3Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Mon Feb 02, 2015 5:06 pm

Bloodypolarbear

Bloodypolarbear

bump

4Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Tue Feb 03, 2015 12:07 am

Kalliope

Kalliope
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-Are you sure you want your sword to weigh 57lbs?

-1st & 2nd Strengths. hmm. I see how another staff member feels about those.

5Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Tue Feb 03, 2015 9:23 pm

Bloodypolarbear

Bloodypolarbear

I'm sure it gives weight to the swing and power

6Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:50 pm

Kalliope

Kalliope
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Founder

Alright. I give me 1/2 Approval. 2nd Staff member for approval or to catch something I may have miss.

7Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Wed Feb 04, 2015 3:43 pm

Wulfric Von'Funk

Wulfric Von'Funk

For the strengths you have, a lava and a wrist damage weakness are not really good counters. Wrist damage is something that can potentially never happen and lava is very very rare. Your strengths are very good, I'd like you to find a couple better weaknesses please.

8Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:31 pm

Bloodypolarbear

Bloodypolarbear

bump this is all I could think of

9Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Wed Feb 04, 2015 7:32 pm

Ryandurbur

Ryandurbur

Looks fine to me.

10Chiheisen no bureido Empty Re: Chiheisen no bureido Thu Feb 05, 2015 7:55 pm

Kalliope

Kalliope
Founder
Founder

Approval.

Bloodypolarbear wrote:Equipment Name: Chiheisen no bureido
Tier: 1
Type: Weapon
Equipment Significance: is used in tandem with a shield for melee combat purposes.
Description:
Spoiler:
it weighs 57lbs and is 1.30 meters in length from pommel to tip of blade

Strengths:
-high resistance to cold and heat
-high resistance to rust and wind damage
-stays sharp twice as long as a normal blade of the same quality


Weaknesses:
-will break when parrying a weapon 2 tiers higher and from weapons of 1 tier higher
-highly susceptible to ice of any kind (will break after 2 tier 1 ice attacks)
-will break when more than 0.7 tons is applied at any one time

Ryandurbur wrote:Looks fine to me.

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